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I Feel so Lucky Tonight... by borda I Feel so Lucky Tonight... by borda
oil/canvas, 27x34 cm, really tiny, not finished yet, any crits or suggestions?

I reposted the image, after I made some changes, some thanks to some helpful suggestions [link] really thank you all

pretty much inspired again, by M. Hussar's paintings
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:iconbear48:
bear48 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Professional
nice job
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:iconnedrekaerr1-13:
NedreKaerr1-13 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
Love it.  :clap:
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:iconvspade:
vSpade Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this reminds me of the mad hatter domain in alice: madness return.  love the scheme
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:iconblackradar:
blackradar Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
eerie cool.
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:iconolatz:
Olatz Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2010
great lucky man!!!! ;)
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:iconmiragie:
Miragie Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010
whoaa...... so interesting
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:iconminzile:
Minzile Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2010   General Artist
that collar is just crazy :XD: . i'm sure you're goint to work out the hair a bit more so i don't have anny suggestions :).
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:iconborda:
borda Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks again my love, I deviated it again with new spirits in her hair :D [link]
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:iconminzile:
Minzile Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010   General Artist
you'd be a great hairdresser :la:! this makes me want to paint!! :boogie:
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:iconomegaman91:
OMEGAMAN91 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010  Professional General Artist
very cool, nice job
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crux-ansata Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow! I love this painting!
You put so much in it and it reflects some prominent's "style of living". plastic surgery, depression, being a marionette, overworked, torn...
Great!
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VGanzman Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010  Student
WOW!!!
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:iconlynnlynnlynnlynn:
lynnlynnlynnlynn Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010
Wow! amazing work with the light...Love it so
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:iconchocola-teapot:
Chocola-Teapot Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010  Student General Artist
That's amazing, But also Very disturbing.

I love it though, WOW! :D
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:iconmlmg:
MLMG Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010
wow really nice! :D
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:iconlizzielupine:
LizzieLupine Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A fantastic walk into the burlesque macabre. The stitching over the face is exquiste and the chessboard ruff is inspired. I also adore the to little denizens that live in it's wig ready to spread their own brand of chaos. May I also add that even though the hair looks amazing, it does seem a little flat as compared to the flamboyancy of the rest of the outfit. Perhaps some whisps, candy flosslike / bird's nest, of similiar hues to the flesh could help. Overall, this is a stunning piece of work.
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AnayaBladewind Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
it reminds me of something i'm planning tomorrow...personally, i'd make the hair more.. lighter, with different kind of texture, instead of the brush strokes but .. that's me, i've noticed you do different things with the hair. may be a little more volume in the dolls but since it's not finished i guess it's okay (: however, i really like it.
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GOTYCKI Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010   Traditional Artist
fantastic! :wow:
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xeena-dragonkizz Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
Soo amazing and very thought provoking, to me it's all about, plastic surgery!!! Love your works...
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Spiderlegs92 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
Love it. Amazing concept! Surreal aspect is superb.
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BRUZETOONZ Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010  Professional General Artist
I wouldn't change a thing...LOVE IT!
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aadriana Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
ahhhhmazing! i will look out for the finished one, although this is dran good as it is :omfg:
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KissofLye Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
A wow. This isn't finished? Ha. It's hard to imagine what more you'll do with it considering how amazing it already is.
The only thing I could think to suggest would perhaps be to put some small design on her corset, perhaps farther illustrating the battle going on upwards. Then again, I rather like it plan too so...
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:iconborda:
borda Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks, I did some small changes after all, but my imagination failed at the corset design...I'm used with the nudes :rofl: [link]
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KissofLye Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2010
Haha. Completely understandable. I imagine designs like that would be hard to think of. Especially if you're used to nudes. :p
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trinafool Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010   Traditional Artist
This is amazing! I'm too lazy to do a full critique, but I guess for me a weak point would be her hand. It doesn't seem as strongly defined as the rest of the painting. Similar with the right side of the hair and the angel, though that could have been glare getting in the way. Also from far away, the hair looks great, but a little closer and it seems to contrast/clash stylistically with the rest of the painting. But Those were all secondary observations, this is an awesome painting.
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Gspooty Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
This is phenomenal, struck a cord.
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townee3 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe smaller aeriolas lol just kidding!!! your work is so imaginitive I just love it!!!. I would like to be inside your brain as you paint must be scary but fun as well. be blessed brotha
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bsmith13 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010   General Artist
Goodness, you are AWESOME with the collars. I've been wanting to do a piece with a the figure wearing a collar like that, then I see your work, and I just quit lol.
I absolutely love and admire your imagination.
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ABitMadInTheHead Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Looking marvelous so far! I love how blatantly creepy it is! As for suggestions, I simply want to see more color in the hair - or at least shading. Just something so that it doesn't appear so flat, but perhaps you were already planning on doing that :D
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:iconborda:
borda Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks Kelly I put some volume and some stuff in her hair, ain't much better but has something to look at =P [link]
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:iconabitmadinthehead:
ABitMadInTheHead Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Indeed an improvement and the overall looks fantastic! You are a brilliant artist!
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HectorPineda Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010  Professional General Artist
itīs perfect. I love your dark side my friend :beer:
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:iconrohav:
Rohav Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
She's literally coming apart at the seams.
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MeowTwice Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
Jesus, I love your imagination so much. I couldn't come up with ideas like this is they were painted neon greeen six inches away from my face.
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StardustThief Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
You're so unpredictible with the titles... haha, I so love that of you~
I praise your technique and ideas. The chess table pattern for the neck frills is an awesome touch. the characters of the whole piece are great, I love how you managed to alude to the soul's polarity with such sublime symbols :heart:
I'm a fan youf surreal work! :)
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TheOn3LeftBehind Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Gorgeous composition!!
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:iconkarolusdiversion:
Karolusdiversion Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
I see a soul in pieces and, in spite of everything, she feels lucky tonight... does not want to surrender.
And I see a vein of irony in the title.
:clap: Great work, Borda
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Miyusa Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
That is awesome kudos to you.~!
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signuspl Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
amazing!
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:iconirio:
Irio Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
man i love it so much.... suggestion? hard to tell with the imagination you have, but well what about some silver coins in her hair, it would be the money the diablo and the angel are playing for?
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:iconborda:
borda Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you, that's a really good suggestion :tighthug:, I forgot that the upper parts should have something to fight for...
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:iconirio:
Irio Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
aw deadly! very happy you looked at my suggestion! :boogie:
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:iconborda:
borda Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
I resubmited it again, it was not gold after all, but some more precious, the lost spirits, should give you a procent for the contribution if I sell it =P
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Irio Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
im so happy you actually worked on that idea!!! i feel like a rockstar now haha! gonna check on the new submition right now!
oh, if you sell it i want a million euros, i'll be fine with that :floating:
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