Love SucksYou're beautifulLike the vial of poisonDancing in front of my eyesBeautiful like the rainThat comes pouring insideBeautiful as the jungleFierce and freeYou're beautiful in a wayThat I can never beYou're freeBut hurryBefore the vial slipsAnd pours its bitter salvationPast my lips.....
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