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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The first thing that stands out to me in this picture is the group of butterflies, obviously. The colors are vibrant and contrast to the earth tones of the rest of the image, which is good. However, your black sweatshirt stands out in stark contrast to the butterflies as well as the background, drawing my eyes away from the subject. If you were to raise the frame of the camera so that more of the sky is showing and less of your shirt (bottom could be the beginning of the forearm?) it would take the large blotch of black away and, though only a slight change, make a big difference to the viewer's focus.
I love it, though. It has been awhile since I wrote a critique and I'm in an analyzing mood.
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