I don't need one hundred words for my critique, this is a wonderful work, and I think you are one of the most creative painters on DA - I totally love your stuff. I would only suggest that the mouth and lips looks a bit unfinished and perhaps slightly too small. The lower teeth especially look slightly unfinished compared to the rest of the painting. I'm not sure if that's because the painting is very small which would make it difficult to do much more detail in the mouth area, ( I didn't notice what the size of the painting is). Everything else looks very good especially the hands. You were perfect with the hands, their color is exactly what the painting needs. Keep it up Borda!
what a concept .. tears being strung like jewels .. that is fantastic ! reminds me kafka when he said ' love is like a knife with which we carve ourselves '
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