oil on canvas 100x80cm still in progress, will repost a better photo in a few days. borda.deviantart.com/art/Sony-… this is the previous version of it. Any idea and suggestion is more than welcome, many thanks!
I consider you to be a much better detail artist than myself, so giving you advice is a bit of a joke.
But if I were to suggest one thing, it would be this:
The skin of the woman I believe needs to be warmed up a bit. Maybe just on the parts that are closest to the viewer. The bio part of her seems to be too cold and faded in comparison to the mechanical alien tentacles.
I can see that you don't want to lose the cool colors that help set the mood of the dark mysterious lab that she is surrounded by.
Maybe a more intense light upon the highlights that the work light is giving off?
But, you're the artist, and you should do what makes you happy. You're doing a great job.
Luv this piece! Beautiful artwork! Beautiful idea! Beautiful execution! BEAUTIFUL!!! The flesh & machine are an awesome combination! Plus the added underwater sea-life aspect of it makes it even more alluring!.....Only thing that I see as far as critiquing is the soft feel of the entire thing! Takes away from the crispness of robotics. Perhaps ur intention was to give it a muddy, forgotten look. But, subject would have pop'd into our world, ALIVE, if brought the realistic components forward!.......other thing I noticed, is her breast: Normally it would fall to the side when a woman is on her back. Is it the water that's making them float back up to a perkier position? Dunno; 1st thing that actually popped out at me!
I absolutely Love this piece tho! And I'm one who feels that our imperfect world is beautiful cuz of it! And thats y I LOVE art! Our minds aren't perfect & so neither should our aim at art be perfection! Its the idea that's magnificent! And u outdid yourself here my friend!